All Comments on 'Not My Husband'

Just another cheating slut wife nothing new.

Hates me a cheating slut and the stories that glorify them. If you're going to write some shit like this, at least let the husband find out and act accordingly. Kick the slut to the curb to face the reality of her actions.

Wonderfully well done. I love to see a new contributor start out with such passion. Please totally ignore the first commenter who obviously has no clue of what sort of storylines one would expect on here. Keep em coming.

Very poetic writing. A delight.

Wow! Well, this is simply superb. Really, as good as it gets. I admire the way you clearly knew exactly what you wanted to do with this piece, and did it with great skill and conviction. Perfect control of details…all the ones one wants, none that one doesn’t. I do hope you’ll write some more. And …did I forget to say? …. very arousing. Bravo!

Absolutely beautiful. Loved the imagery.

I had planned to say more, to elaborate

on the delight I felt as I read certain turns

of phrase, however I seem to be late to

the party. Sevenpillars beat me to it.

So, what he said…

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