All Comments on 'Not My Type: Adele Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Thank You

Loving this!!!!!!!!!!!!! Made me laugh and made me cry. Can't wait for the rest, please keep posting.

Thanks again.

InnocentCuriosityInnocentCuriosityalmost 14 years ago
So true!

A timely lesson from Father Hottie!! *grins*

FAB story - absolutely loving it!

cpm09cpm09almost 14 years ago
Amazing!

Have I ever told you that I think you are amazing? you are!

Thank you.

coffeeandteacoffeeandteaalmost 14 years ago

Another wonderful chapter to this tale. Can't wait to read on. Seriously if this was book I would totally buy it!!! Your writing is captivating and your ability to paint such wonderful characters and storyline!

Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
You are just great

I've said it before, but I'll say it again, like the poster below. You are just awesome. Great story - very affecting, it actually feels pretty profound, and that really can't be said for an awful lot of stories on this site :) Can't wait for the next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Hmmmm

I've never wanted to reach in and smack an imaginary person before now. Strange feeling, haha. PLEASE let Adele give in soon! I love your stories! Please, more soon! =)

MissWizzMissWizzalmost 14 years ago
nice sermon ;-)

For someone who claims to be a bit uneasy with the subject of church you put together a really nice sermon.

I can really relate to the characters, although Adele does seem to be a bit dense at times.

Love your writing, looking forward to the next chapter.

cafeoleymascafeoleymasalmost 14 years ago
if she doesn't want him ...

If Adele doesn't want Nate, send him my way! (Can we clone him maybe?)

Bravo on another great installment!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Beautifully written.

I love your writing. Thank-you.

DeeLilyDeeLilyalmost 14 years ago
Another great chapter

Really, great work! You're writing speaks from the heart - it's quite breathtaking! Please, send us another chapter soon!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Ah, this must be the pattern then...

So one chapter every week. Next monday just doesn't come soon enough.

Didn't think that Adele had this quality at all. You surprised me a bit by showing how stubborn she turned out to be. And I think that Nate truly is a saint. I wish more people would forgive each other just like that. We definitely need more forgiveness, patience, and faith in this world.

You are making me all fuzzed up. I sure wish they find one another soon before I get even more emotionally involved in this piece.

LakergirlLakergirlalmost 14 years ago
Excellent and....

I know you mentioned you're not "religious" so to speak but I think perhaps ....... The sermon was great and had touches of an actual possible one. Just thought I'd note. Thanks again and I love Rhi & Joe, Adele & Nate are becoming my favs now. (Lilly never had a chance...there are moments I just don't get her.) Thanks again and will be looking for more net week. Lakergirl

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 14 years ago
Great

I really did love this chapter and I can't wait to read more. I know you said you're not religious but I did get a little offended by the comment from Nate about why having sex before marriage is important. Just thought I'd mention that. Great work.

MollyDollyMollyDollyalmost 14 years ago
*sigh*

Can't wait to see how this all turns out! Such a wonderful buildup between Adele and Nathan! Thank you, FK! :)

DirrtyDeeDirrtyDeealmost 14 years ago

Adele's story has got to be my favourite of the Not My Type series. Her story is so touching

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
TV? Movie?

I love it. I've ready the Not My Type series and now this Adele series and I'm enamored. It is actually reminding me how much I love my wife and it's a great feeling here close to thanks giving!

ParttimereaderParttimereaderabout 8 years ago
Nice

Exactly what trust is

And Adele is restricted by Harry every day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
still good, but...

grammar: The motherly tone sent Lilly and I into waves of laughter

grammar: So whatever it is that exists between Nate and I is a dead-end

us obsession with procreation: He deserves a wife who can give him a family.

american association of eyebrow cocking with naughtiness, sexual innuendo: Rhi cocked a perfect chestnut eyebrow

just my thoughts; still like the series!

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