by firstkiss
grammar: The motherly tone sent Lilly and I into waves of laughter
grammar: So whatever it is that exists between Nate and I is a dead-end
us obsession with procreation: He deserves a wife who can give him a family.
american association of eyebrow cocking with naughtiness, sexual innuendo: Rhi cocked a perfect chestnut eyebrow
just my thoughts; still like the series!
I love it. I've ready the Not My Type series and now this Adele series and I'm enamored. It is actually reminding me how much I love my wife and it's a great feeling here close to thanks giving!
Adele's story has got to be my favourite of the Not My Type series. Her story is so touching
Can't wait to see how this all turns out! Such a wonderful buildup between Adele and Nathan! Thank you, FK! :)
I really did love this chapter and I can't wait to read more. I know you said you're not religious but I did get a little offended by the comment from Nate about why having sex before marriage is important. Just thought I'd mention that. Great work.
I know you mentioned you're not "religious" so to speak but I think perhaps ....... The sermon was great and had touches of an actual possible one. Just thought I'd note. Thanks again and I love Rhi & Joe, Adele & Nate are becoming my favs now. (Lilly never had a chance...there are moments I just don't get her.) Thanks again and will be looking for more net week. Lakergirl
So one chapter every week. Next monday just doesn't come soon enough.
Didn't think that Adele had this quality at all. You surprised me a bit by showing how stubborn she turned out to be. And I think that Nate truly is a saint. I wish more people would forgive each other just like that. We definitely need more forgiveness, patience, and faith in this world.
You are making me all fuzzed up. I sure wish they find one another soon before I get even more emotionally involved in this piece.
Really, great work! You're writing speaks from the heart - it's quite breathtaking! Please, send us another chapter soon!!!
If Adele doesn't want Nate, send him my way! (Can we clone him maybe?)
Bravo on another great installment!
For someone who claims to be a bit uneasy with the subject of church you put together a really nice sermon.
I can really relate to the characters, although Adele does seem to be a bit dense at times.
Love your writing, looking forward to the next chapter.
I've never wanted to reach in and smack an imaginary person before now. Strange feeling, haha. PLEASE let Adele give in soon! I love your stories! Please, more soon! =)
I've said it before, but I'll say it again, like the poster below. You are just awesome. Great story - very affecting, it actually feels pretty profound, and that really can't be said for an awful lot of stories on this site :) Can't wait for the next instalment.
Another wonderful chapter to this tale. Can't wait to read on. Seriously if this was book I would totally buy it!!! Your writing is captivating and your ability to paint such wonderful characters and storyline!
Love it!
Have I ever told you that I think you are amazing? you are!
Thank you.
A timely lesson from Father Hottie!! *grins*
FAB story - absolutely loving it!
Loving this!!!!!!!!!!!!! Made me laugh and made me cry. Can't wait for the rest, please keep posting.
Thanks again.