All Comments on 'Not My Type Ch. 02'

I've been waiting for this for a while!! Thank you for contunuing with this srory line!! Amazing!

Please, please, please don't abandon the "I thought I Hated Him" story!

Hot story, see it never hurts to give someone a chance, you might find something worthwhile. Thanks for this story I really enjoyed it.

This is a wonderful piece of work. You really know how to create believable and wonderful characters and give them personalities. I love that he was as nervous as she and that he asked if he should stay, it was a perfect last touch. Beautiful work, Firstkiss. More please!

Your characters are great...I love all the sweet men! Keep it up.

from "Hell Yeah"? If so, I need to take a trip to Canada and find it and the men who frequent it. Loving your stories.... keep up the great work.

As if finding your writing wasn't enough of a treat, now you're updating more often. Thank you, and please keep up the great work.

....what happens at 3! What does he owe her and how will he pay? Loved this, looking forward to chapter 3!

You really *can* write, friend. Only wish my hook-ups were like the one in your story. Keep 'em coming ... err, I mean keep at it.

now my favorite writer on this site!! All of your stories have been amazing! I love that all of your men are so manly but also gentle and caring. And it's so nice that you don't take so long to update your stories like most writers here! Thank you so much!

Your stories just keep getting better, I loved this and will be watching for the next installment,,,, at 3!!!

wow i Definitely wanna see more of this story i'm loving this one can't wait to see what happens next

Your stories put a smile on my face.

Thank you, Ms J.

Also, tattoos? I have such a THING for tattoos. Especially the ones you described; reminds me of an ex-girlfriend of mine ;)

Once again, well done on a fantastic chapter! We are truly not worthy to be reading this brilliance for free.

You know where to find me.

Zera

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Is it my imagination or are your stories getting hotter? Very good so far, I look forward to the next one!

Holy crap! I wish I could pick up a guy at a bar like that!!

Very sweet men in your stories.

please continue this storyline!!

ok, that's just me being envious.

HOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOT

Oh so rare for a story to be so detailed but passionate and sensual, not crude or mechanical. Great pace and buildup. Easy to share the emotions of the characters.

Thank you.

and no condom? My one complaint about all these stories.

You have a wonderful way with words. Your male characters say things that I only hope one day I will hear. I love your work!

holy shit! your stories are exactly what perfect sex should be...so hot! i cannot praise you enough. You really seem to understand women in the most elemental way, and it's nice to see a story reflect, accurately, the way most women think and feel. kudos my friend. you are amazing. keep up the GREAT work!

I haven't read a story of yours that hasn't me want to moan out loud. You obviously write your sories for women and from my experience and the other comments on here you do a damn good job of pleasing us ;D

No really, I want an Adam. -HOT- I truely enjoy your stories. You write wonderfully. =)

Great

You have a real talent for writing. I always enjoy your stories, especially this one. My one tiny nitpick would be your use of adverbs, especially with your dialogue tags. You could get rid of most of them and your writing would come across as even more professional than it already does. Not a major thing, really, it's just something I've noticed.

Well done on some wonderful writing. Your stories are funny, sexy and really sweet. Very enjoyable.

Being so damned OLD (never mind how old), I'm from a generation where tattoos were definitely not a good thing. No respectable man had them. The only man I ever knew well who did was my wife-beating brother-in-law. So Adam's tatts and piercings are a real hurdle for me. (In my mind's eye, I have to keep editing them out.) I have to say honestly that, if this were the first of your stories I'd read, the tatts would probably have stopped me at Ch. 01, but because I've read all your other stories posted here at Lit and know the quality of your work, I'm going on with Not My Type even though Adam's... not my type. lol To quote an old Fleetwood Mac song - you make loving fun.

of story. daring and delicious...

you specifically mentioned the purse with condoms, phone, money, etc. why not mention that s/he used one?!? SO many unsafe sex stories on this site!! unplanned pregnancy and std's are NOT sexy.

It's fantasy, stop being a douche. If morons don't know in this day and age to practice safe sex having and using a condom in the story isn't going to change that

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I felt like a teenager again, discovering kissing for the first time; Adam and I had invented it and no one in all the generations which preceded us or anyone in the yet unborn future would ever kiss that well; it just wasn't possible to improve on that moment.

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Oh shit... this isn't at all like most fics on here... this is Really GOOD!

J