by bradley_stoke
I really liked your story but wished it was a little longer though.
I like you idea for The Program. I have been working on a version of it myself, one with a particular angle on practicality. Mine is a few pages long but not yet ready for publication. I guess I should go ahead and upload it here as "Part 1", and then hope to finish the rest. Thanks for your submission!
good possible of a 5, good story but without other chapters it was pain bad. Yes you can write well… But there needed to be more.