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by 88girfriend

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oldpantythiefoldpantythiefabout 2 years ago

Got some spelling errors or typos, but a nice story never the less.

AnotherChapterAnotherChapterabout 2 years ago

Yes, there are a few minor problems with spelling and grammar but it is a sweet little story and it reminds an old fool like me about what is treasure in this life and what are just shiny bits we, like crows, are attracted to!

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I hope you enjoy my stories. I have tried to created my own universe where all the characters from many of my stories live and oftentimes interact with each other in crossovers. I am a very open minded person and respect all, constructive comments, good or bad. I have incor...