All Comments on 'Not Quite a White Knight Bk. 03 Pt. 03'

Why, oh why must authors be so cruel, always stopping at such interesting moments? I was looking forward to hearing more of Grisha’s motivations. What were her goals and who was helping her? I’ll just have to wait until the next submission. Certainly I should be grateful for the eleven wonderful pages I’ve just enjoyed. Mustn’t be too greedy, right? Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Still going strong but I'd like more action outside the bedrooms. An excellent story full of detail and such imagination.

All in all I do like this story (or should I say these books). However, from time to time, I come across too many impossibles. Scenes that would not work (i.e. hands and arms in impossibles angels). But also still numerous typos. It is a shame because it distracts.