All Comments on 'Not So Much a Stable "Boy"'

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Really enjoyed it, I look forward to more!

if this story is set in the 1800 or that century, some of your details are a bit 20th century.. i felt a bit confused because a woman or young girl has to remain virgin until marrige and that was a fact that i was looking forward to reading about.. you just gave me all in one chapter..

this book if you are writing or expanding on this story needs o be done slowly as in u define the characters and build a relationship between the two people having the sex so it dont feel so slap dab thank you mam.

neverhe less you have a great base to work from and i will like to see what else you come up with

ps get an editor who will help you fleshen up and out the story

I look forward to seeing how true love gets round this quandary.

HP