by hickoryfarmer
It was wonderful. The twist at the end had me laughing out loud. Very good job, entertaining and kept my attention until the last word.
this soon had me captured! Beautiful twist at the end: nobody could have seen that coming!
I almost quit reading after the first two or three sentences. But I'm sure glad that I didn't as I found it quite funny at times with many erotic passages. Thanks.
Great and , hot datails and an amaZing surprise at the end! Loved this story! Thanks