All Comments on 'Not that Kind of Play'

I liked it but wished it was longer and the sex was described in more detail. Four stars.

Great story! Keep up the good work! Thanks

Love a good classic tale, though I never expected to come across THIS particular rendition of Will Shakespeare's masterpiece! Christopher Marlowe might even say--"It was a 'tale well told'! I particularly enjoyed the slowly growing crescendo of "sound and fury" of the most wondrous kind....

Well done! Now...bring on the second act!

MLJ

I liked it. I could see my son and I doing an authentic romantic role on stage.

I like the premise of accidental seduction through verisimilitude, and the dialogue is nonchalant without being blasé. Like Sex4lf57, I would have liked it more fleshed-out, especially around their emotions: the sex just -happens- and they seem far too casual about it.

This demands a rewrite and more chapters. Well done. I look forward to more of your work. Thanks for writing.

A beautiful mixture of historical play and lust between a mother and her son. It's a good start and if possible the writer should share what happens next. Thank you for sharing.