All Comments on 'Not the Sharpest Knife Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nobody this stupid could have gotten into any college I know. She's just too stupid. Not naive, just plain stupid.

PRNP3PPRNP3Pabout 3 years ago

I like the story so far. A nice, slow buildup to, what i hope to be, a bit more adventurous next few chapters. I do however more or less agree with the comment that the main character has been made dumb or ignorant way too much. It kind of feels like she's not of this world which, for me, does devalue the credibility and therefore my overall rating of the story. Cheers

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