All Comments on 'Not What It Seems Ch. 03'

Not my kind of story I guess. I like to find myself liking, sympathizing, or at least connecting to a character. I don't feel sorry for any of them.

I am discomfitted by the age difference. I just feel so bad for this girl that she was obsessed over at the age of 19 by Valentine and Haltor. It is unfair that she had her development stunted by them. As I read this story I switch 19 to 24 and 24 to 29 and then I just feel less guilty for enjoying it so much. Thanks again for sharing your talent.

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do not wait a long time for the update please... continue. NOW!!! :)

you must continue! best story by far!!

Love it love it love it....pleeeaaassseee continue it

In the first chapters, I had a hard time understanding the links between John, Ryan and Jared. I understand what the author tried to do, but the chronicity was not clear at the time, and I think that, more than anything, it confused the readers. Nonetheless, I look forward to the conclusion of this work. Who is be the chosen one?

Another great chapter! Can't wait to find out what happened between Alin and Jared that eneded their romance.

I'm sooo happy u decided to continue writing this story, it's fantastic! Can't wait for the next part, would love them to be longer though

You have talent... keep it up!

riveting actually... but.. a week between installments?? perhaps 2-3 days would be a good compromise.

i look forward to chap4

Complex feelings well written, continue!

The distance between Love and Hate is surprisingly short. A very good story.