All Comments on 'Not What It Seems Ch. 05'

you are creating nice characters. I'm thinking that john and charles need to get theirs

AHHHHH THAT IS KILLING ME@!!@@! PLEASE MAKE IT LONGER >.< The anticipation is destroying meeee.

don't worry to much about updating "enough" as long as you update I'm all good. As a human being I know life gets in the way of fiction lol but He has so little faith in her, I would be dishearten if i was her.

super super super! totally loved it. I hope you post soon.

Masterful, brilliant!

I never doubted that there was a fully plausible backstory, but reading it... the passing was superb, exciting even! Just a fantastic job!

Kudos!

~Airdrie

This was well worth the wait! Can't wait to read more!

Definately one of the best romance written so far this year. Am glad to be able to enjoy your wonderul writing. Will keep tap on your updates.

Hey ! Update soon please. This story is one my favorites. so waitin a new hot chapter.

Hey ascii

you are making us wait forever for the next chapter

please update asap

I was hoping that you did get to post Chapter 6 before you disappeared in March and seeing as it's now May I really wish you had! Haha I hope you don't keep us waiting for too long :) Although these characters can sometimes be frustrating, you write in such a way that readers can truly feel the pain, anguish, hurt and love that the characters feel. Great stuff - I'm glad I found your story!

this is so good. too much drama.

but please assure me that there will be a happy ending please. i do not want Alin hurt so bad.

good writing btw. :)

Women AND men! Despicable! LOL!

Sorry but this is utter garbage. Ludicrous plot that is hard to follow, confusing cast of characters and poor explanation of the storyline, which chops back and forth like a dog’s tail.