All Comments on 'Not What It Seems Ch. 08'

Been a long time but I still love this story. Hope Timothy gets what is coming to him.

8 months waiting for an update, I'd given up, having said that I know life gets in the way and study is more important, but I am disappointed in this chapter, I feel like there is something missing, but I can't put my finger on it, but I really wish you'd give Alin some brains, for an intelligent girl, she sure is stupid and naive sometimes.

ok i read the first 2 chapters and no romance then she gets raped and blackmailed by her father. i guess i just dont get the romance from this. to me it reads more like a slut in training, rape story and not romance.

W.B we missed jared so much when will the new chapter be up ?? looking forward to it already don't make us wait plz !!

First of all great story! I just wanted to say about the person who said they didn't see the romance in it all, why have they read up to chapter 8?!

I love this story I was just wondering if diamonds really could break? You seem like such an intelligent person so I think if you wrote it it must be so but I always thought diamonds were the hardest substance or maybe it is artistic license....love to know more about that...totally inconsequential to the the story I am willing to suspend disbelief because that scene showcased Jared's vulnerability so well.

Can't wait!

I know it is over a decade later, but can you write some more chapters. I want to see if you make Alin even dumber than you already made her. Maybe she can just get calls from any men and just meet them, get molested and say it will never happen again for 10 more chapters. I stopped reading this illiterate, senseless, mind-numbing crap 6 chapters ago. I am just going through to see what happened when he finds out how stupid the both of them are.