All Comments on 'Not Your Typical Family Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Why would he release his slave mother and slave sister.

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81almost 3 years ago

So mom finally comes back and he gives her away for a month? Waited for nothing couldn't get past the first page.

Barber_o_SavilleBarber_o_Savillealmost 3 years agoAuthor

FYI - if you read he only gave her away to his uncle - who was staying there for a month - he loaned her out for impregnation.

Bedroomeyes - he didnt release mother - he loaned her out to his Uncle for a month so jack could impregnate his sister (JC's mother.)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

When Jack was there for the funeral he said he never fucked his sister now he's jcs dad?plus Jason is wanting to be with another man at school after pledging life,love,and devotion to him.coming home to be bred first then says she's Nota whore after getting the car

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

Jacks lied to JC about not being with mom in one of the chapters about the funeral 😞,,, and Jacks is JC possibly dad 😞 ,,,,along with JC giving permission for mom to be with Jacks for 30 days 🤦🏼‍♂️ and Jazzy is possibly his half sister,,, JC never did talk to Jacks and mom about that,,,

I am surprised that JC didn’t kick Jacks and mom out of the house after he found out the truth in the kitchen,,, then Jax wanted to be pregnant and then she wants to sleep with another guy at school, so is that not breaking the rules??? And also gets a new car out of the deal 😞

This last chapter was really bad and sent a 4⭐️ series to a final 2⭐️ in this final chapter

tadeuschtadeusch12 months ago

The author is completely confused about his ideas about impregnating slave girls. Jason wants to impregnate his mother, tells her so, fucks her, plugs her pussy with an inflatable plug, then gives the mother to Uncle Jack to impregnate her. And why would Jason want his uncle's baby? There is a glimpse of Master wanting to brand his slaves with tattoos or red-hot iron, but no follow-up, and there is also a glimpse of Jazzy having nipple piercings and a clitoris ring, but no follow-up either. A college slave wants to fuck a stranger. This is nonsense for a slave, for she has given her body, thoughts, and soul to her Master, hasn't she, author?

Aussie1951Aussie19514 months ago
Re @ 01timber67 and Tadeusch comments

Sadly you both made some very valid points. Perhaps our author needs to review what has been written too get the story back on track?

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