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Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81about 3 years ago

Why the duplicate story?

Barber_o_SavilleBarber_o_Savilleabout 3 years agoAuthor

Bedroomeyes81 - hit send with the wrong file - this is about a month old and not completely edited. I tried to get it removed however, still showed up.

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81almost 3 years ago

Ah ok thought maybe lite goofed and did a double post. All good just checking. Good story either way. Thanks for the reply as well

AsgarthAsgarthalmost 3 years ago

I rammed home and stopped blowing four ropes

would it not have been better without (and stopped)

Barber_o_SavilleBarber_o_Savillealmost 3 years agoAuthor

Asgarth - this is an unedited version of Chapter 6 - could not delete once I submitted. If you read CH 6 - that has been edited.

Barber

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I have been criticized by some individuals with no name for my darker side of my stories, honestly constructive criticism is far better than assuming one’s character is not well received - you have not lived in my head, body or soul, you have not walked a mile, yard, foot , or...

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