All Comments on 'Not Yours Ch. 01'

Well i am interested. I hope you continue this. I can invision ivy possibly saving natalie, using her tech skills, once they kidnap the wrong girl. Both could end up is some fofbidden situations during this story.

Yeah I agree with the person above this has great potential. Will it still be non-consent? Cause the ending makes it sound like the general is a “good guy”. It might make more sense if he was cruel for the non-con stuff. I’m really excited to see where you will take this story!!

Good first story so far. Well written, flowed well. I didn't notice any, if there was any, errors. You have my interest. Great first start. I will be watching for more of your work.

I just happened to be scanning new non-con, reluctance authors, glad I did.

I would give 5* for the writing skills, I gave 4* until I see more of the story.

You wrote this first chapter very well. I like it, I hope you continue.