All Comments on 'Not Yours Ch. 02'

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Socially_Inept over 12 years ago

Ah crap!

What a way to end a chapter. You could of left chapter one as it was, but I'm glad you didn't. Don't you DARE leave us hanging like this.

Anonymousover 12 years ago

Question? and Comment

Joseph's brother got addicted to cocaine at 12? I'm sure it happens but damn!

I hope the Joseph decks Pete. I hope Leanne decks her mom. And I hope that since Joseph and Leanne aren't father and daughter that they can have a life of their own together.

Anonymousover 12 years ago

Clifhanger, can't wait for more to come. Please write more.

newflowers0102 over 12 years ago

cliffhanger!!!

OMG - this is such a great story!! When are you going to finish chapter three?

wmarinw over 12 years ago

Absolutely Stunning

I think you have everyone at the edge of their seats waiting for the ground to come back up after dropping everyone off the cliff!!!

Chief3Blanket about 9 years ago

Wow

That was unexpected at the end of this chapter.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

Leanne's House?!

How did this 18yo girl buy a house?!

Diecast1 over 2 years ago

Getting interesting if I may say. Love it. AAAAAA+++++

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No longer got the free time I use to but I'm always thinking up more stories. Any feedback is welcome but please try to be civil, I'm doing this for fun and you're losing nothing but your own time if you don't like the story. The second half of Stuck is coming, providing it'...

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