All Comments on 'Nothing Wrong with Doing Anything'

Good premise.

Lots of sex. But each time there's sex it's so rushed.

Needs lots more on the way of preliminaries/foreplay/teasing.

Needs dialog during all of this about how good it feels -- both to the one doing and the one it's being done to. Needs dialog about what he/she would like next. Needs edging, drawing out the sexual encounter/s but not permitting the other to cum yet.

Maybe watching some porn together to give them new ideas.

Four stars.

I liked it. A little humor along the way. The SOs getting together was a nice touch. As was the final line.

loved it

Loved it. 5 Stars. Please continue.

I really enjoyed the story but the final line by Mom made it priceless! LOL! At least Mom and Dad realize that step-brothers and sisters are fair game. And when you think about they know each other better than anyone else and they've been living together for....how long? I don't know but I seriously wonder how many step-brothers and sister get it on in "Real" life? I would be willing to bet that it happens more than we think!

The last line should have been, "They must think we're pretty damn stupid! Right, step-brother?"

The last line made me laugh. Teens often forget that adults were teenagers to, once upon a time. Five stars.

Thanks for sharing this tale but it was more of just a collection of progressive sexual acts than a story. I get the boredom but there is usually an angle or connection that brings the story to life and beyond just sex. Again, appreciate the story.

Cute, enjoyable, great ending.

5 for 5, Loved this quick little story... but I have to agree with fixer43 on the ending. LoL