All Comments on 'Notorious Ch. 01'

by BondiLisa

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 16 years ago
Excellent Super hot!

I loved this! It's well written, extremly erotic, and very arousing!

Great job!

craiggie501craiggie501over 16 years ago

I like it cause it's totally believable, and all the details about how men flirt with women, definitely reminds me of picking up women in Sydney. Dates, numbers, a quick pash, taxis and a good fuck. My kinda night, well told from a writer who can build a story. Love Ya Work.

Gus AsparGus Asparover 16 years ago
Fucking delicious!

What more can I say? I so want to be one of the boys at that party!

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 16 years ago
A prefect climax . . .

. . . to the slow, sexy build-up at the party. So realisitc, this is a story that every reader can enjoy and identify with.

MagicFingersMagicFingersover 16 years ago
Hot and sexy

Lisa's very sensual. Well written and well told. Can't wait to get to the next chapter of her exploits!

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