All Comments on 'Now It Is His Turn'

I give it a 5 on its own terms, a hot, breathless BDSM "scene." But I'd love to see this author's skilled, erotic and poetic pen turned to the task of developing character, conflict in drama in longer format stories. Huge turn-on. Thank you.

P.S. The word you want for the business end of a riding crop is "striker" ;)

I think the love word is used far too easily, these days.

However, maybe a little more dialogue to flesh it out would help the overall story.