All Comments on '"Now... When You Say Naked..."'

Mixing sex and politics is not sexy

A most intriguing story! It is almost the idea for a story rather than the story itself. We get to know very little about either person, but it draws you in and leaves you wondering what they were really like and whether much more was going on than we are told. A sequel filling in some of the bits and giving further developments would be fascinating particularly if it retained the suggestive rather than omniscient stance. I also like the very natural clear style.

Interesting story line. This could be the basis for a much more in-depth and very erotic story, or description of emotions, physical appearance, and I arousal. If it is a factual account, there’s nothing wrong with embellishing and expanding the narrative with some fantasy…