by msblackstone
A bit confusing at first, but creative plot scenario. Just adds to suspense. Looks like a fast and promising introduction into a great tale. Thanks
Trying to suspend disbelief. I like your writing, but why a naked man would come out of the closet and then go off down the street and presumedly thru the neighborhood is a bit puzzling.
Not confusing at all to follow if you've encountered a homeless person willing to do just about anything for food or a mentally unstable person who doesn't particularly do things according to how everyday people conduct themselves. This story is very intriguing and I look forward to reading more.