All Comments on 'Nowhere to Run Ch. 01'

by msblackstone

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A bit confusing at first, but creative plot scenario. Just adds to suspense. Looks like a fast and promising introduction into a great tale. Thanks

MarthaMcKinleyMarthaMcKinleyover 2 years ago

Trying to suspend disbelief. I like your writing, but why a naked man would come out of the closet and then go off down the street and presumedly thru the neighborhood is a bit puzzling.

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literateabout 2 years ago

Not confusing at all to follow if you've encountered a homeless person willing to do just about anything for food or a mentally unstable person who doesn't particularly do things according to how everyday people conduct themselves. This story is very intriguing and I look forward to reading more.

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