All Comments on 'Nude Noir Ch. 02'

Apart from a very few typos, it was a story that seemed to have a natural flow over teh two chapters. With the second chapter ending, you could leave it there and it would seem quite complete in and of itself. On the other hand, as always, your characters are so loveable one could easily follow more of their story. Tough call.

You are, for me, one of the top authors on lit where you include sex or not. I think you have other lines to add more too as well. "Government Service" being one of them. I hope you do so.

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the hints in this one, I almost expected the boat ride to end differently.

I get more hints from Ali's dad and best friend where the twists are going.

This is going to be amazing like all of your great stories

I love this story it is very creative. Looking forward to ch3??

So, which dame is gonna trash Ian’s heart ? I’m curious how Raymond Chandler would wrap this up . Still, an enjoyable read.

Your best work in a long time. I'm on the edge of my seat!