by JimBob44
I liked more than I would. The dialogue, though. Was it supposed to be southern? Immature? Excited? Just ended up like they had a stutter. I'm sure that's not what you were hearing in your head, but still....
I remember the story there was no reason to remove it. God Bless and thank you for all your stories.
Enjoyed rereading this, got all excited when I saw the new story icon then realized I had seen it before but its a great story.
Just as good as the original story and you certainly don’t need to be corrected. I also don’t think any of your stories is or were substandard and wish you would have left all your stories posted as I enjoy rereading your stories while waiting for you to post a new story. Five stars. Thanks Jimbob44.
A sincere thank you for the re write and repost it is a fantastic story. Well written storyline and characters with excellent dialogue and humor! Just right blend of stereotypes to help with the humor. This made an excellent reading time. Sadly I do not remember the original so not sure I did read it. Pleased that your pleasure to write this back into your posts. Definitely full marks as I was highly entertained. I will have to favorite since worthy of reading again!
Please do keep writing for your pleasure and I will keep reading for my enjoyment.