All Comments on 'Nude Swim, Double Ds, A Big Dick!'

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mkp2kmkp2kover 1 year ago

The idea was good...but...the actual structure and phrasing leaves much to be desired. For example: "...as your cum made its exit from your penis"? I dried up as soon as I read that.

Great idea, bad execution.

CoolboiyzCoolboiyzover 1 year ago

Awesome, hope to see another swap story with incest taboo.

CoolboiyzCoolboiyzover 1 year ago

Awesome, hope to see another swap story with incest taboo.

elling50elling50over 1 year ago

I liked this story. The plot was interesting and plausible and the ending hinted at the dangers for the involved couples. 5 stars.

GavlosTheGreekGavlosTheGreek12 months ago

This made me absolutely so horny

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