All Comments on 'Nude Walk'

Gotta be a part two.

Really enjoyed it, a well written, seen story

Why wait a year to meet again

Next time it should be a threesome

greatly entertaining with emotional ups and downs, and such an extreme finish!

smiles for long whiles. hoping for more and more

A thoroughly enjoyable story. Darby is one hell of a good friend to Melodee. 5* ~~ JBE

This was a great story and fun to read. I really like your style. You need to continue as the set up is already in place.What's next for you and Melodee and Darby?

Beginnings

'I realized I had a problem - tumescence'

So much trouble starts that way...

Wow, thank you for all the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I was feeling a bit down because I re-read it and found several typos I should have caught before submission, but your comments picked me right back up. I promise to do better next time!

Great story! This had all the good elements: a realistic scenario, great visualization, an unexpectedly sexy situation, a great build up, and great sexy fun! Excellent job

Great story.

They definitely should meet again :)

Great job for a first story!

I'd like to read a sequel where Melodee, Aaron, and Darby can get together again in a more private location..

Good luck in the contest.

Great first story. Really well written and to the theme. I hope our votes count as votes in the contest. Looking forward to more .

Slap ass cute. Believable, possible.5 stars