All Comments on 'Nudist Beach Sex'

A little more character and plot development would benefit your story.

Also look up English tenses and grammer, it is harder to get into the story when the reader stumbles across small errors.

Nevertheless keep up writing and you will become better.

Its fairly obvious that English isn't your first language. If it is, learn the difference between was and were.

Justplainjeff ~ thank you for your comment. As you said my English is not the best but I try, and comments like that just make people sad& not want to learn the language. Can you speak mine?? Maybe if you was to get laid with a lady, you might stop looking at peoples grammar & enjoy yourself

Lordmike2021: I can speak a bit of French, Spanish and German, and since you don't say where you are from I'm unable to say if I can speak yours. If you want to submit stories primarily in English it might behoove you to improve. As for your truly shitty comment, ask my wife of 51 years about getting laid!!

Great story! Keep writing you are doing great with English being your second language!

Thank you for the nice comment. I do try with English but it’s hard.. unlike Jeff ~ he is just plain & not nice about people learning different language

An exhibitionist Shangri-la.5*s

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