All Comments on 'Nuë and the Djinn Ch. 05'

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HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderover 2 years ago

Loved it. First thing he says, "I'm going to kill you." 5 Stars.

kiwiplumkiwiplumover 2 years ago

Heart beating hard!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I don't care what the naysayers are saying. This is a good story and I'm loving it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Saved by fucking - so freaking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Bloody brilliant! I love your writing style it leaps off the page (screen 🤪) and unfolds into a film in the reader’s mind. I’m guessing this version of his incora is going to enjoy kink, that’s the nature of this type of thing - that sexual preferences can be shaped by early experiences. I love the way you do that too invent words put them in the right context and the understanding is automatic; so incora = soul mate or something similar (possibly beloved?).

Timing is everything! Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

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Harp here. Harp here. Thanks for your comments and votes. I released The Ballad of Decker Crane on Literotica and have also published it on Amazon. I know it’s weird, but I’ve got readers in both places, I like having an ISBN number, and sometimes people ask me how to show...

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