by marycontrary1162
Great story and well written. Having spent alot of time in hospital I know what it's like to fantasize about the nursing staff. Angels of mercy and it looks like Ashley is one. You did miss a golden opportunity in this story. It would have really capped the story that after Mary moves in and gets settled. There's a knock on the door and it's Ashley's twin sister who's going to be visiting for awhile.
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Cheers
Well written and you have a good sense of story lines. Keep writing wonderful stories.
I'm impressed and I don't go around handing out accolades to everyone. Hope you continue to blossom. Well done.
Let's throw probability/realism to the winds and indulge in pure fantasy. And such a lovely, innocent fantasy it is too! Touching, well-written and sexy.