All Comments on 'Nurses Become Birthday Present'

by naughtynurse18

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nightwyngnightwyngabout 18 years ago
HOTTER THAN HELL!

Damned... That's all I can say!

Keep writing babe!

Night~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Where do I sign up??

This story was soooo fucking HOT!! I need to find out what base this hospital is at so I can get an assignment there!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wonderful

You are easily my new favorite author on Literotica since Tawny T. Every story is fantastic! Don't stop writing.

MrKnowitallMrKnowitallabout 18 years ago
I Salute You!

This is an excellent story. You are definately one of the best writers I've read recently. I really admire your mastery of the emotional sub-plots. Group sex stories are sometimes hard to read because some writers aren't very good at keeping the characters and their actions straight. You accomplished this easily with extremely hot results. I have to admit, the slutty, naughty-girl attitude is an incredible turn-on and makes for some very arousing entertainment. Thanks! Keep writing.

tinman69stinman69sabout 18 years ago
Good grief this is a great story!!

You are one helluva good, no....great!!! writer!! This is such a good hot story. The story line is just perfect! The characters are described wonderfully!! And knowing the relationship between a lot of officers and enlisted men, it is very true to character!!!

This story is a wonderful read!!!

AzuldrgonAzuldrgonabout 18 years ago
Wow!!!!!!!

Wonderfully hot story. Came twice while reading it. vry descriptive!!

Reiam23Reiam23almost 18 years ago
My god...

Jesus...that was some of the most filthy shit I've ever read, so fucking hot though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good

It was good, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. You need to go back and make sure your names remain consistent throughout. I am pretty sure the male names were swapped at a couple points, so it made it hard knowing who was doing what to who.

Aussie_ScrewAussie_Screwover 15 years ago
Holy Shit!

That was beyond wonderful! I'm still laughing at how much Tom got screwed over, humour mixed with group sex with added spice. Bloody wonderful!

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