by naughtynurse18
That was beyond wonderful! I'm still laughing at how much Tom got screwed over, humour mixed with group sex with added spice. Bloody wonderful!
It was good, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. You need to go back and make sure your names remain consistent throughout. I am pretty sure the male names were swapped at a couple points, so it made it hard knowing who was doing what to who.
Jesus...that was some of the most filthy shit I've ever read, so fucking hot though.
Wonderfully hot story. Came twice while reading it. vry descriptive!!
You are one helluva good, no....great!!! writer!! This is such a good hot story. The story line is just perfect! The characters are described wonderfully!! And knowing the relationship between a lot of officers and enlisted men, it is very true to character!!!
This story is a wonderful read!!!
This is an excellent story. You are definately one of the best writers I've read recently. I really admire your mastery of the emotional sub-plots. Group sex stories are sometimes hard to read because some writers aren't very good at keeping the characters and their actions straight. You accomplished this easily with extremely hot results. I have to admit, the slutty, naughty-girl attitude is an incredible turn-on and makes for some very arousing entertainment. Thanks! Keep writing.
You are easily my new favorite author on Literotica since Tawny T. Every story is fantastic! Don't stop writing.
This story was soooo fucking HOT!! I need to find out what base this hospital is at so I can get an assignment there!!