by moscarosea
Good premise.
Rushes to serious sex too fast.
Needed extended teasing.
Four stars.
The strange thing is I got to the comment box and started typing, then thinking others were likely to to have criticised I thought I'd better check those before I stated how good I thought this is. I've given a full 10*. I don't understand the anon comment about too fast as this is an ill man being nursed back to health and such an intimate situation enhances such feelings.
I really like this, it's basically a fairly common storyline but I like the way the thought train took it.
H_32
Gently erotic and arousing for those who love the M/S genre.... ;-)
Thanks for posting here -- hope to see more from you.
Ohhh. Such a well-done story of temptation and self-seduction. Very erotic. Love how Mummy took care of the young man throughout, esp. the hot, sticky finale. 5 stars, wishing Mummy would take care of me as well.
Usually I'm not in the mother/son theme. But this one is very erotic. Thank you.
You should learn how to use quotation marks. Dialogue in italics is irritating.
Thank you everyone for your feedback -- I will be sure to work on at least a second part to this story. :)