by squirty69
Thanks for the wonderful introduction chapter ... looking forward to reading more of your compositions in the days ahead ..
I like the writing style, the problem is that your disclaimer at the beginning promises (threatens?) creampies and snowballs. The story could easily go there, but it stopped. When I saw that he came and there was only a paragraph or two left I was hoping that he was at least going to lick her cummy toes clean.
Hurry and write Ch. 02. Add the cummy toe cleaning, creampie and snowball and, if the writing style is the same, you will get a full 5 stars from me.