All Comments on 'O Pale Moon'

Excellent drama, and I was so glad that Maeve and Shona were able to see off the evil Ciar - with a little help from the family xxxxx.

Nice that you Muse has returned xxxxx

Your three stories were very different and very good. Thanks for sharing.

The appearance of a new story from Maonaigh (which name I pronounce, internally, as Mooney) is cause for celebration. The posting of three on the same date deserves a site-wide festival!

What a beautiful, charming story. What a romp in pre-Christian mysticism!

In my personal pantheon, Maonaigh ranks among the top 5 (easily the top 5) authors on Literotica. And judging by this, I see he is still at the top of his game.

Now on to the other two new offerings.

My heart was filled with joy when I saw you had posted again Maonaigh and not just one but three stories to delight and entertain us . I did smile at the Fae being turned on by Shona and Maeve , always knew I liked the Fae . A stonkingly good tale of good triumphing over evil and a shout out to Shona's parents Darragh and Keri for their help and understanding . Brilliant Maonaigh as always , thank you . Jc

A very well thought out creative fantasy story. There for a little while I was dreading the outcome with Ciar. The main characters well brilliant. One down two to go. Thanks for sharing your wonder story telling talents.

Excellent. Of course that goes without saying... You might've saved it for Hallowe'en, but I'mglad you didn't. I very much liked the bard's tale to start, and the feel that the story was a continuation of that. It would be great to read aloud at a campout when everyone's sitting aroud the fire.

What a beautiful tale of love. Every time I see a story by you pop up, I know I will enjoy it. Three at once is a real treat. Thank you for sharing. Five stars!

well done your friends are write you write well be safe and happy a fan shayne

I wonder if you have seen inside my head Maonaigh. I carry the image of a silver wolf as a totem, and a copper haired one. Reminds me of another time and another life.

I loved this, your touches of blending older words and Celtic in to the story just makes it poetry to read.

A most excellent story that I will recommend to my friends. <3

Five stars as always. May your Muse continue whispering in your ear.

What a beautiful fairy tale! Thank you so much for sharing it. 5*

This truly was a gift. Reminded me of reading "Blood & Chocolate" in my youth. Thank you for a wonderful tale of fantasy and love.

This story has got to be once of my favorites... They need a couple more stars for this one. Great Job.

A short but compelling story that is worth more than the usual five stars. You've drawn from a wealth of old stories and created an entirely new one. The battle between the old religion and the newer religion of the nailed god is a theme I've written about in the past but more of that later. Your rendering of the old tongue was refreshing and made it feel all the more realistic. Be interesting to see what happens next but I'll leave that in your capable hands and just hope for more.

Religion, if taken to heart and a prayer to the god is helping a broken heart or soul or is strengthening for the days work, then its perfect ...... But humans mistake misuse the religion for fighting and killing others, others in thinking or believing ...... So old wisdom old teachings died and the new religions forming uniformed bible follower, brave believers never questioning the word written down ...... Oh so your old time teachings, honoring the natures goddes or gods are truly worth listening to ..... All is energy and this flow it is and should not be broken or sickness in thousand different outcomes will fall out ..... Its nothing religious its just a logical consequence of our actings and destroying

So this was a wonderful Fanatsie tale 🐺🐺🐺🐺🐺🐺🐺🐺🐺🐺ten wolfs

What another literary tale with characters to empathize with, even if they are werewolves! Really enjoyable and so well written. Thanks for sharing!