All Comments on 'Obelisk'

So unexpected at the start. Loved the story, hope there is a follow up, for this couple.

And I loved it. Your women are such airy bitches, certain of their conquests and they delight in flaunting their control. So naughty to read about...but pride goeth before a fall. I hope you have it in mind to publish a longer story, perhaps even a series. You write exceptionally well.