All Comments on 'Object of Beauty'

But there has to be more. Who are these people? What will happen next? Unless this girl is some kind of ninja, she'll be caught by the bad guys. This guy in particular is going to relish getting his hands on her.

There doesn't have to be any more. All there has to be is the "declaration" of her independence, and the promise that, with the memory stick, she has insurance.

Not necessarily erotic, but very well written. You can imply the thought and planning that went into her actions.

There was no need to use the line from "Pretty Woman"