All Comments on 'Oblivion & Doubt Ch. 05'

I love this story. Your dialogue inside the mind of each character is spot on. Your writing style and the use of words into sentences and how they create the depth of each character is perfect. Thank you for sharing your talents

Keep it up SNS! You are a quite the wordsmith. I do like how you integrate both present and past in this series.

Every chapter is adding a bit more substance to events and attitudes from Truth & Admiration. I can't wait to read more (from both series).

My first reaction: a glimpse into an ongoing relationship that seemed too brief - not rushed or lacking, just left me on edge wanting more. Read again and still on edge; beautiful word craft continues to reveal.

Great series absolutely love it. Good development and very nice writing and style of describing the scenes. So a big thanks for giving this to us and i am looking forward to (hopefully many) more chapters.

So glad to see these comments, and that you are all enjoying the story as well as the writing. I get that the chapters are little more than glimpses and glad to see that's not taking away from your enjoyment Migbird. It's my pleasure to share these stories - they are more interesting and challenging to write than I ever imagined they might be - and I'm very happy to see them finding an audience.