by ilikeithot6308
The dude has way too many phone#s not to have at least one more story
Great story, though I feel bad for him. How could he top his trip. Would have been nice if they ended with a romance (katlyn?) or perhaps if they had given him a role in the pageant. Perhaps percent judge given his lack of bias. Enjoyed it regardless
Fantastic story and would love to see where Kaitlyn and Cole go from here....
A great story! Extremely unlikely of course, but very hot and sexy. And if I wanted realism (like someone wrote) I wouldn't expect to come to this site for it.
Regarding a follow-up I agree with many other posters here in saying;
Go with Kaitlyn! She was definitely the most appealing of the girls. But please, a generous helping of some of the other girls too! And Cole might need to have his teeth cleaned by the sexy Vanessa!
The only thing that (slightly) bothered me was that at times he was a bit rude, didn't introduce himself at the table for example, and with some girls he was a bit "yeah, whatever", he seemed almost indifferent.
Oh yeah, who won? We're not told! Unless I missed it somehow. It's not really the point here, I get that, but I still want to know if it was one Cole's girls who won!
Still, I will eagerly look forward to a new installment!
A relationship with Kaitlyn please.... just Kaitlyn forget the rest
Especially Kaitlyn, Lynda, and Barb. Maybe even an appointment at a certain dental office.
This was a little too impossible for me to believe. Your best works, like Double Duty, star a believable female character, a sense of flirtation, and sexual chemistry which this just ignored.
You write a "will they, won't they?" world very well. Sure, we're on literotica, we know they will - but why, and when make it a story, and that's why I read you. I can believe it could happen.
Two weeks, 100 women, all available, and not one bit of butt play? Even if anal isn't part 'Cole's' interest, one has to work hard to avoid the ass area for that long with that many partners. I was hoping the Captain would liked it up the backside.
Hi man love this story would be great to get some back story on the island like whats going on there and who are the benefactors definitely a strange twist to the island wish we could know what?
Lots of boobs. Big Boobs. Lots of sex.
But -- for my taste -- it's all too obvious and guaranteed.
Starting at a nude beach means to there's no step by step unveiling. No question that every boob is seen from moment one. No uncovering. No undressing. No wondering what they'll look like.
Other than that, well written, but for me -- simply not erotic.
More Kaitlyn because she was the most genuine. I'd love to see more of her in your stories!
More Marla, Chrissy, Kaitlyn and Vanessa! There some strong and interesting characters here that could easily continue the Cole story or support some nice spin offs!
I would love to see Cole ultimately end up with the lovely, sexy and smart Kaitlyn!
A top of the line Literotica story. I would really like to see Cole get together with several special lady's.
More please.
The Further Adventures of Cole would be well received I think.
Loved the story! Would be very interested in seeing if and what happens once everyone is off the island. Please add to what is an outstanding story.
Wow is all I can say!
It would be great if this story could spawn another story, like a reunion story or Cole getting a job there. The latter is unlikely because it appears all employees are women but it would be interesting. He could reacquaint with the resort employees and maybe guests
Fantastic story! I definitely wouldn't mind seeing some of these girls in other stories, particularly Marla, Chrissy, Kaitlyn and Vanessa!
But when Cole says he doesn't look a gift pussy in the mouth, it made me recall a strange historical novel (in my little public library, of all places, back in the late 70's I think) where a girl and her brother, displaced from their home in 18th century France, had adventures. She had a vagina dentata, and her brother had to adapt (in the various ways familiar to our fellow readers here) to get it on. But she was prone to getting raped, and her ferocious sabre-toothed pussy made short work of her attackers (pun intended). Can't imagine how it was purchased and placed in the new books section, but there it was. I have been trying to find a reference to this book, without success. I wonder if any of our erudite colleagues might have a clue.
So in a fantasy world, it might be wise to check. Would also discover how old that pussy might be. Great fantasy story. I liked Kaitlin best of the lot, and not only because in my nuclear family we have all together 5 degrees from Columbia and Harvard. Go baby blue and crimson!
Kaitlyn and cole ought to get togther as a couple and return to the island for a reunion of sorts with the others.