All Comments on 'OC Lust Ch. 04'

your story was good but you should of had someone proof read it for you. the would of caught the error in the story. you said taylor was lying naked on the bed. then later you have kristen takeing off taylor shirt and bra. if she is already nude? the story was good but wasn't as hot as it could of been you should of had them do a lot more then just muff dive or tongue kristen asshole. she should off used a nice long thick strapon on her. plus the story was too short for my taste.but better then the first three.

Good story, how about you continue with this part, the "lesbian" stuff. I can just picture them doing that.

Paul

For the next chapter get everyone inlvolved kirsten,seth,ryan,summer,sandy,taylor