by lazyways
Now, THAT was an uncommon romance storyline. Excellent writing!
Your writing is still good, but these characters were much less compelling than those in your previous stories. I like your quirky heroines. Callie just doesn't make the cut.
If you don't look like an Adonis, you're SOL.
A pretty good story but I thought the ending was way too abrupt. Just my 2 cents but I would’ve liked a little more.