All Comments on 'Odalisque'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A pretty good story but I thought the ending was way too abrupt. Just my 2 cents but I would’ve liked a little more.

SampkyangSampkyangover 7 years ago
CALLIE?

She is nothing but a well paid WHORE...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
no one has sympathy for Denver

If you don't look like an Adonis, you're SOL.

undividedlightundividedlightover 12 years ago

Your writing is still good, but these characters were much less compelling than those in your previous stories. I like your quirky heroines. Callie just doesn't make the cut.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Well Done

In a word, excellent!

WanderingGatorWanderingGatorover 12 years ago

Very interesting and captivating. Kudos!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

Nicely written and developed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very nice

interesting twist on the blackmail for work. Nice writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

Beautiful story.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
Different!

Now, THAT was an uncommon romance storyline. Excellent writing!

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