All Comments on 'Odessa Moves On'

So, pointless? So, no one enjoyed anything.

Nice start, but not more - Too short and plotwise not creative enough for a good story, more a rushed introduction than a real good chapter. Maybe here the author just was distracted by summer heat or was rushed by RL issues.

Please continue to complete Your story idea as I do like Your other stories (at least as far as I remember) and writing style.

All the best