All Comments on 'Oedipus Was Right Ch. 01'

Great Start!

5Stars

Good you got right to the point

I like it please continue.

Good beginnings.... Let's see more!

I also concur. Great start – 5 stars – I definitely would like to see how David and Mary’s relationship develops. Breast milk has be hooked, so to speak.

Go for it!!

More please.

great story more please!!

I would like to see this story continue.

Man that was good and yes I would love to read more.

Okay - please please continue their adventures. ;)

Please continue!

Nice.

Now we need to know more about; thier relationship and why the breast feeding?

Both sound very good.

Kerp on wrting

I'll read more just to find out how morning sickness figures into the story, as he just arrived home.....

Looking forward to the rest of the story

Want more but also answers, why was she lactating? Is his father still around?

Yeah! Give us more. This was pretty short. It was still hot enough to get 5*

Tc

the son should definitely give her a big belly

Why did he feel a rush of Vaseline and why did she think he would be OK with fucking her without messing up their relationship

More please

very good keep going

Good tale continue it. Tell us how old she and he are.

3/5

Looking forward to the next chapter.....

Would love another chapter

Not much to it but you need too continue??????????? 3 stars!

Loved it but you went from them going out and then they were having sex, what happened in between ??????????? Still 5 stars