All Comments on 'Of Crystals and Watches Ch. 05'

Glad to see this adventure is continuing! Hope there's another hundred chapters ahead!

I have been enjoying your story and the way you chose to make its continued progression. Aside from the widely varied and sexy group that makes up the harem, your choice to slowly integrate the info on the crystals and possibly the watch is a great way to move along the story while filling in some backstory which was the one thing that was bothering me at the beginning. You seem to planned out this story very well and continue to add little side stories that make this an even better read. Thanks for putting all the thought into this story.

J.D.

Only downside is I've been having trouble tracking the story in the SJI lately. This probably won't help with that.

Too many spelling mistakes

Jason is too chicken to have a girlfriend, much less a harem...