by Zurai
Normally it takes me at least five pages to have a decent orgasm, but your story made me cream myself in one page. I'd like... no I want... No I need more chapters of this. Please continue this series.
Very good as a first story. I agree that more should follow. I see you marked it Chapter 1, so good luck with the remainder of it.
Wonderful concept , a little cheesy on the words sometimes, but that might just be me liking more resistant characters.