All Comments on 'Of Hope Lost and Found Ch. 04'

I eagerly await each new chapter in this excellent series. Thanks!

I certainly hope that 'Hopes Advocate' will continue, the start was compelling reading and I look forward to more chapters.

Nageren, I am waiting for the next chapter.

Indians are extremely family oriented. And Indian men generally want wife and children. Also, the Indian culture usually diminishes women, sometimes cruelly and violently. It will be very interesting to read how you explain Thomas attraction for Dottie, and her acceptance of his attitudes and values. I expect you will use his Indian heritage to explain his looks, but he will act and talk like some SNAG: Sensitive New Age Guy. That's OK. How else you going to get Dottie fucking again? Kind of obvious.

Reading some of these comments and feedbacks some *Anonymous* leave, so very disrespectful and unnecessary ( example comments about Thomas being Indian etc) I wonder would they still write such ignorance if their names were up there.. anyhow just wanted to mention you are truly a brilliant and awesome writer. I love all your stories ..all of them every character with or without their touch of darkness. Please continue to bless us with your wonderful tales.. thank you again

Kiya

Well written. Excellent voice. In literotica one expects sex and there has been none. I'm giving it a high rating anyway because the quality of the writing has pulled me in.