All Comments on 'Of Kingdoms Doomed and Drowned'

by PaxNurgle

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Taliesin1Taliesin1over 6 years ago
Nice

A well written story with a Lovecraftian flavour.

Some paradoxical elements, which are fine, as such, in a supernatural story but seem a bit illogical. Why seaweed and terrestrial plants? Why would the sea lion be dead, it's an air breather?

The ending felt too abrupt for the atmosphere you created.

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