All Comments on 'Off the Ice'

Not really original (sport jock + random boy), but I really like the way it is written :)

We want a follow-up !!!!!

Maybe add some depth to it (not just sex), unless it was intended that way ;)

Can't wait !

Loved the story. Please write more. Great job

nice jerk story

Don't think it would be a one off for them. Please don't make it a one off for us!

EDIT, first sentence alone has errors!

I like your stories but don't you know how good cum tastes. So far none of the guys in the stories I have read by you have any of them swallowed. It is the only thing to do.