All Comments on 'Office Servitude'

I enjoyed reading this story It was interesting and kept my attention almost the entire time. I am not a huge fan of reading but occasionally I come here to try to find a good story. This was a great story

I can't wait to read on, you're a natural.

Enjoyed Your story, especially how well thought out the overall plot and characters interactions are. Erotic fun parts were good as well, but being webbed into a naturally flowing plot line made this story even better.

Thanks for sharing and please write more.

I think of your stories as a guilty pleasure. This one pleased me.

Is this the start of a series? You've certainly left that impression.

Please continue!

It's a good story. I think it will be very interesting to see where you take it.

You might want to delve on the collaring, flogging and auction as a flashback maybe?

I'd like to read follow ups.

wow that was hot you must continue

please continue with this story

It definitely needs to continue. We need to know what the next 6 months holds for her. We also what happened at the end of her slave term, will she still submit to the will of me peak and Ms Tracy or will her and Adam have a life together. How many more bunny trails can this story go?

Of course I want the story to continue. Anxious.

loved it so far but only thing is it could be longer would love to see this become a long one going from being a slave to coming out of it and possibly more 8/10

I could feel the tingling myself!

Please continue , way better than I expected, surprisingly well written

More ? Yes Please !!!!

We need a continuation of the story to know how Denise will be fuck and utilise all along. And furthermore what is going to be her behaviour after the six months !!

Keep it going...and the lodge series too. Great universe. I would like to see how the six months end....hopefully with Adam.

Great job! I really enjoyed reading your story. It's one of the hottest ones I've read all year. Please continue the storyline!

Please continue. Ive enjoyed all of your series so far.

Likeable characters, limited cruelty to the slave, by all means please continue!

The three penal series stories are outstanding. I hope you continue them slowly but surely. They are definitely hot.

Part 2 has been submitted for publication. Thanks everyone for the support!

I'm just insanely curious about how they expect there to be a normal collegial dynamic between them post-enslavement. I mean, if I had a colleague who I could fuck whenever I wanted, or if I was fucked by a colleague whenever they wanted, even if just for six months, that six months would cast a shadow over every interaction I had with them for the rest of my life. I'm not saying I don't buy it at all, but I imagine it would take considerable work on the author's part to make it believable. I suppose in a society with a much stronger free-love mindset, that might be possible. Like, I could imagine becoming normal colleagues with someone who use to wash my car, and them being normal with her afterwards could be a more extreme version of this.

Part of me wonders why, given the setting, didn't they just make her off limits completely. That's what Derek from the Slave Camp series did with his slaves - when they worked normal civilian jobs, all employment contracts specifically forbade the sexual harassment or usage. And it's not like the people here lost out that much by buying Denise. They got her on the cheap, and she's a talented professional who makes a lot of money for the company and would continue to do so in the future. Having her work for free is already a profit, and if asked, she would probably repay the money they spent on her several times over.

Loved reading it. Please continue.

Responding to the question about the collegial dynamic, in the ps universe over a quarter of the population has served some term of penal servitude. In polite society, it is not mentioned afterwards. Keep reading because that's going to be explored. And yes, the next part will be out soon.

ESS: I apologize for my unscheduled sabbatical. This is quality story-telling. Thank you for this.

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And, umm, golly... Adam would pay "anything" to deflower her and "coincidentally" received a huge bonus today? Is there a puppetmaster in the house? Anyone, Beuller, Beuller?

I reread this today based on your earlier email. It really is a great piece of entertaining story telling.